All of those lines slap! They really hook you and make you want to read more, and "Bet you're really good at counting cards." is such a Santos thing to say. Definitely read it in her voice
You make a really good point about how short-form limits you and forces you to get creative with how you get all the information across in a limited space. And it is fun! And I think you do a really good job of it based on these lines. Would love to see it if you do come back and do this again later on :D
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Date: 2026-03-06 07:12 pm (UTC)You make a really good point about how short-form limits you and forces you to get creative with how you get all the information across in a limited space. And it is fun! And I think you do a really good job of it based on these lines. Would love to see it if you do come back and do this again later on :D